hey hey miss savita I wrote you a song
when the crowds they were aplenty and the lines they were long
you'd smile through your window, quicker than the rest
no trouble for small change, honey you were the best.
hey hey miss savita what keeps you going so cool
is there someone who loves you, calls you his jewel
do you see him in every man who comes up your way
or are you hoping for a traveller to walk up to you today
hey hey miss savita will I be seeing you again
I've just quit my job, won't be taking the train
maybe we'd go out for tea and talk of everyday routines,
the people you've seen and of ticketing machines.
Good Intentions
2 weeks ago
6 comments:
wow , a kavita for Savita ! great stuff as usual . the first line reminded me of "Hey Woody Guthrie I wrote you a song".i'd prefer your poem anyday to "a song for Woody" which frankly left me quite wooden.not that dylan would care.or woody guthrie for that matter...
i love the second para...what keeps you going?...so beautiful!!!
baba, this is the first floor of churchgate station of I am not wrong?
also The above mentioned woody guthrie gave a new thought as well.
Cheersr!!!!
hey Bhaskar. you're right, i took the title and the tune from Dylan. and i'm real glad you liked my one.
thanks Pooja. :-)
and Ali Baba! you're right. it is the main ticketing area of Churchgate, not the first floor though. i've seen her there from 7:30 - not sure how much earlier she gets in.
my first visit here, will keep coming back for more
really very nice ..
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